Her Hair

Like a waterfall it falls,

Down the small of her back,

A waterfall of beauty

In a field of dark black.

Unmeasurable elegance,

It ripples in the wind,

Sending chills down our arms,

Goosebumps unpinned.

Hear the sound of water rushing, 

Hear the crow cry out

A mixture of depth and beauty,

A fountain just sprung out. 

Her hair in best condition,

A bun released at last,

Narrow like a river,

Yet like the oceans, 

Vast.

Reviews

[trainwreck]

Very nice. I'm duly impressed. I love the changes from describing what is seen and what is felt. Very seamless and classy. Good write and style here.

[ChristinaRuth_13]

charming! great job with the rhyming too - i always have trouble with that

[Sarah]

This is great! I love the descriptions!

[mystic soul]

wow wonderful description of hairs!! This shows your talent as a poet... i wish i too had hairs like waterfalls...;[]... keep writing.....