You are so lovely

You are so lovely

A Poem by anthophile

Every word that you say sounds so lovely, 

Especially when you tell me that you love me

What once was a crush,

Became something so profound at the touch

© 2017 anthophile

Author's Note

Feel free to tell me what you think about my writing or if you want to give me advice about it.

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No advice to give. You've written about a feeling that is universal. Nice job.

Posted 1 Year Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

What starts with a "Hi!" and a smile can end in a rocking chair. Or does it really ever end, if it's the true stuff? Maybe it carry's on as an energy meant to be fed to others.

Enjoyed your poem. Thanks for sharing.

Posted 1 Year Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Added on November 5, 2017
Last Updated on November 5, 2017
Tags: love, crush




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