Resurrect me

trying to live without those who becomes a vital part of your life ..is like living in an illusion

Resurrect me

 

 

I am drowning in the sea of despair

struggling to hear your whispers.

I know I tried to live without you

But this anguish won’t let me go through….

Go through the erroneous path we’ve chosen

Where is only me save you.

 

Those salad days remind me

How we had spent them gleefully

But those days are now just mere memories

Which stabs my heart ferociously

 and makes me lame unconsciously.

 

Here I am standing in the rain

Feeling blind under these dark clouds’ shade.

I’m missing that sunshine

which would phosphoresce me

and would bring me back into a human being.

 

I wish I could grasp that best golden time

To seize you with my bruised hands

No I can’t live this wretched life

It’s breaking me in several parts.

I can’t live with this torn heart like a lifeless being

So please bring me back to the Life

I always wanted to be in.

 

I want you to breathe in me

 Please, resurrect me.

I want you to bring me back home

Please don’t leave me

 

I want to live in those halcyon days

When  we hold on to each other

Above everything else…..

 

I want to be resurrected

Just by you

And for you…..

 

 

 

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Reviews

[Muhammad Qasim]

i hereby order you to come back to life.... ressurected...nice work... :pp

[The dark story]

aye aye captain!!

[Muhammad Qasim]

good work CADET!!

[An owl on the moon]

What a beautiful depth of spirit here... the anguish of existence... the longing for new life... the hope to be held secure by one you can love and lean on. You share so well of the worlds that mingle within us.

[The dark story]

thanks .i'm glad you liked it...

[Minerva]

I really like the second stanza

[The dark story]

:D..i am really glad you like it.

[ewest1220]

Love the desperate feel and then the last stanza just blew me away. The feeling was perfect great job!

[The dark story]

thanks a lot west....

[Sarusai Hiryu]

Not only is this a pretty good poem, it really does capture the essence of Tsunade. Good job both as a poet and a Naruto fan!

[The dark story]

thank you so much.i am really glad you like it.....

[The dark story]

but..tsunade was not in my mind when i was writing this

[Sarusai Hiryu]

Really? Then why'd you put her pic at the top?
It does fit, anyway...

[Gracie Is Pregnant]

It has this air of desperation about it that I particularly like. Good work!

[The dark story]

i thank you from the bottom of my heart for reviewing my poem.i'm glad you like it

[Rika]

I toatly agree with the meaning behind this. I really like your work so keep it up!!!

[The dark story]

thank you so much.....

[Laura Maidah]

I don't like the "just" in the second line. It's implicit in tone and effs up the meter.

[The dark story]

THANK YOU FOR YOUR Review..i'll just correct it..

[The dark story]

i'm sorry if it sounded so bad.but i didn't meant to:(

[Laura Maidah]

it's not soo bad. just a correction IMHO

[The dark story]

i humbly thank you for pointing it out:)

[Akhand Pratap Singh]

Just as I ever say!! its an excellent piece.. A nice poem with deep thoughts and meaning put behind it!

[The dark story]

thank you for your reviews endless sea....

[Brandon Mathis]

that was very good i wouldn't change anything of it the quality of the poem is excellent

[The dark story]

thank you so much ....i'm glad you liked it!!!!!!

[Brandon Mathis]

your welcome