Mistake

You say I've changed why don't you ask the reason from me?
You say I don't care how do you know when you've never seen me in my prayers
You think I ignore, how do you suppose?
You say I don't understand but do you know how much I try?
You say all this but never listen to my reply
but today I'll make you listen the answer
in the language my heart knows best

I have changed because I fight for your atention all the time 
You say I ignore, You say I don't understand
but my love do you see
how much I chase you?
Isn't it fair?
Promised myself never to look back..
You said you'll never leave my hand
but why does it feels as if we are losing 
as if all we did was just a mistake..

Reviews

[Saddam]

I have changed because I fight for your
atention all the time
You say I ignore, You say I don't understand
Another good art by you. But as I every time say, you must be love. It is not mistake, but mistak has taken a place because of love. Nice to read your poetry. Loveya

[78Jon]

Is this a poem about a break up or relationship going bad?

[DrD]

Ah yes, those first hints of neglect and disinterest are indeed disturbing and you captured that extremely well in this work. I liked the movement of the poem and the sincerity of the word selection. It was a truly enjoyable read.

[Rida Sarwar]

Thank you sir :)