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a solemn oath–
hot words clinging
to thick, sticky air;
dancing
to rhythmic vibrations;
slamming
against rigid consonants;
leaping
through hollow vowels

Reviews

[gonzologic]

Everything about this poem is perfectly executed, right down to the title.
This is a fine example of maximum efficiency at work.
Magic.

[mattavelli]

So, what's a high definition woman like you doing in a pixilated place like this?