Flowers are like someone you love.

Flowers are like someone you love.

A Poem by Heath Payton
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Flowers are like someone you love.
We are mesmerized and admire their beauty.
We put them up on a pedestal for all to see.
We show them off brag about them to others.
Every time we see them the sight alone brightens your day.
So we love them and take care of them in hopes that they will give us just ONE more day.

© 2008 Heath Payton


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I LOVE IT WOW I LOVED IT THE FIRST TIME I READ IT AND ALL THE MANY TIMES I READ IT GREAT JOB PLEASE KEEP IT UP!

Posted 15 Years Ago


This is so beautiful, and lovely.

Posted 15 Years Ago


marvelous analogy
for the beautiful world
of flowers & love.

me

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like this, it's creative. good write =D
-michelle



Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is wonderful, direct feelings, a lovely write.....Kim

Posted 15 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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Added on November 28, 2008

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Heath Payton
Heath Payton

Oklahoma City, OK



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My name is Heath Payton I am new to writing, but I think it might be a new passion. I plan writing primarily for therapy and motivation, but who knows what else. more..

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