EYES WIDE SHUT...

EYES WIDE SHUT...

A Poem by Poeticme
"

a dream I didn't want to wake from.

"

A DREAM OF TWO PEOPLE , SO IN LOVE

 LIKE A SHOWER OF CANDY COATED KISSES , FROM UP ABOVE

WAVES OF LIFE , CRASH ON THE SHORE

 AS I HOLD YOU CLOSE , TO NEVER IGNORE

YOUR SKIN ON MY SKIN , YOUR HAND IN MY HAND 

LOVING  YOU GENTLY , LAYING IN THE SAND

A WALK IN THE PARK , BRINGS A VISION OF YOU

 BUT I CANT REACH YOUR SPACE , AND I DONT KNOW WHAT TO DO

 A HURRIED WALK TOWARDS YOU  

BUT YOU KEEP STAYING AWAY

THE CRAZY WAY , DREAMS LIKE TO PLAY

 I SMELL YOU IN THE AIR

AS THE WIND DANCES, THROUGH YOUR BEAUTIFUL HAIR.

I ROLL OVER , AND I SEE YOU AGAIN

 ITS A BUBBLEBATH FOR TWO , SO WE BOTH JUMP IN

 CARESSING YOU , I FEEL YOUR HEART BEAT WITH MINE,

 TO DIE AT THIS MOMENT , WOULD BE JUST FINE

LOOKING IN YOUR EYES , WITHOUT A WORD

ARE THE MOST BEAUTIFUL WORDS , I HAVE EVER HEARD

AS WE LAUGH AND LOVE , I WANT YOU TO STAY

 AND AS I WAKE , YOU FADE AWAY ……………..

 

 

 


© 2017 Poeticme



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Poeticme
WHAT A DREAM...........................................................

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Dude, why even wake from such Lucid Dream?

Posted 8 Months Ago


dreams dreams the mystic undefined, i feel you bro. a description of what would be without the interuption of reality. oh if we could always be lucid

Posted 8 Months Ago


It's a sweet poem. Try a different font. It's too severe for the mood of the poem.

Posted 11 Months Ago


This is so touching and so very beuatiful.
Such a loving write.

Posted 8 Years Ago


How beautiful and touching. I hung on every word not wanting to turn away but feeling like I was intruding on something so private. Much talent and passion lies within your soul, brother. I am very proud you're part of my family. XOXO

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Again this is so beautiful. What caught my eye was the title, like it it's unique, I can feel the emotion of love in this, wonderfully written.....Kim

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on October 9, 2008
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Poeticme
Poeticme

Katy, Tx, TX



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I have been writing poetry for years,I have a great imagination,well as all knows that is a must for a poetic soul.My poetry comes from my heart,cannot help that fact.I am really starting to settle in.. more..

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