Someone to Care

Smiles surround her well being,

not one is thrown her way.
Sometimes she gets tired of crying,

it's deep inside her every day.

She doesn't want to accept her parents love,

maybe because they aren't her real ones.
She tries and looks for answers from above.

she's never amused by puns.
Life gets harder for her,
and she isn't able to always smiles,
Everyone always turns the other shoulder,
she wants to be gone for just a while.
There's one person who knows what she's about,
but she only cares about her ex boyfriend.
She holds no doubt,
that her "life" is near its end.
She calls out with a silent voice,
a desperate cry for survival.
it's becoming her last choice,
this is her last mile.
All she needs is someone,
a pair of arms to embrace.
A guy to call her hun,
someone to recognize her face.
A tender kiss to make her feel safe,
a pair of eyes to gaze back.
The only thing she needs,
is someone to care.

Author's Note

fresh from my mind as of 2/28/10 21:00.

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Reviews

[HereWithoutYou<3]

Cool, I love it just how I feel sometimes.

[Frantzuu]

The poem is great, and the rhyming is awesome. Great work, keep it up :)

[Lynn B Glover]

Karina, I love the poem, especially the rhyming. You have taken your poetic ability and drawn me right into the poem and I felt your pain. That is what makes a great poet. Good Job, a new friand, Lynn

[kewlbluetiger]

Oh my, this is very real. Usually not a big fan of artistic formatting, but here you did a fantastic job. The reaching out, and desperation comes right off the page; but seems truly authentic. Nice write. Hope you find that "someone" soon. Can't wait to read more of your work.

[D.R. Wilsey Jr.]

Just a quick suggestion. The yellow is rather hard to read on the white background.

[Sarah]

i really conected with this poem. i feel the exact same way..its almost as if you wrote it for me..not to sound greedy or self centered or anything..im just saying i really relate to this poem. well donee