Deafening Silence

Deafening Silence

A Poem by Hurry

Once a loud place now forcefully hushed
The steps of ferocious yet playful feline
Razzle-dazzle throughout the place
Still yet thunderous paws

The noisy a*s crickets yelling and screaming
Speechless they became before sunlight
How I wish I could find and kill them now
And once more hush this loud place

I talk to the loud and mute waves
I listen to their silent harangue
I told them about how I've been
They were closemouthed as always

In this loud silence, I remember you
Your ferocious and playful movement
Your thunderous and quite words
Your silent and loud smile

How I love this silence, this deafening sound
For it reminds me of you

© 2017 Hurry



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Hurry
I openly accept criticism :3 THANKS!

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I agree. Sometimes silence is needed.
"In this loud silence, I remember you
Your ferocious and playful movement
Your thunderous and quite words
Your silent and loud smile"
The above lines. Powerful person described. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 1 Year Ago


This is my favorite writing of yours, I love how you somehow connect your fourth stanza to the first one. I always look forward for more poems. Please keep on writing :)

U GO PUFFIN (!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!)
-Blue Jay x

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hurry

1 Year Ago

Its nice to hear constructive words from you! But I'm not worthy of your praise senpai HAHAHAH
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This is really a great poem. I love the use of sound to show memories, especially sad ones like this. Keep up the great work!

Posted 1 Year Ago



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Added on December 29, 2016
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