Hollow

Hollow

A Poem by boobalajcushion
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Holed in my room for days, I needed an outlet. 2015

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Hollow

Vile parasites in my mind,
Why can't all words just be kind?
Dying flowers and bruising lies..
Tainted hearts and drowning cries.
How can you sit for hours, 
Yet feel no time? 
Smile for others,
But inside you cry.
Haunted soul, sallow eyes..
Dead dreams and nothing nice.

Nothing, nothing, nothing.

© 2017 boobalajcushion



Author's Note

boobalajcushion
This was a dark time for me! I always find getting it out helps, any tips with punctuation and grammar etc, let me know how to improve future works :)

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A very heartfelt piece full of painful pathos.

Posted 2 Months Ago


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Gee
Tis a dark piece. Looking at the date I'm hoping you are in a better place mentally now.
Dark but we'll written B

Posted 2 Months Ago


boobalajcushion

2 Months Ago

Ah, I am in a MUCH better place now. Thank you for your comment! Appreciate it :)
Gee

2 Months Ago

My pleasure......strange name:)

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Added on July 30, 2017
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Tags: depression, anxiety, mental health, poetry, poem, metaphors, metaphorical, society, life, love, happiness, sadness, rain, dark, psychology, psychological, eyes

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boobalajcushion
boobalajcushion

Brisbane, Queensland, Australia



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I'm a creative individual who typically starts something and wanders to the next project, leaving an unfinished trail of chaos behind myself. Hobbies in this area include literature, poetry, singing, .. more..

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