The pain a Father can bring

Do you not see that i am in pain?

Why would you do this to me? i'm going insane.

We're your family, can't you see?

Why must i try so hard for you, my own father to love me?

You just went ahead and made a new family.

Theres no time for me now, you have her and your new baby.

The thought of all this kills me inside.

I wish somehow i could run and hide.

I couldn't stand to see you with a new baby.

Because i know that you should be with me, Savannah,Jake, and Lee.

When I think about it, I want to cry.

The only question i have is why.

The only thing i can say to you guys is that i will hate you till the day that i die.

Reviews

[Lorraine]

How sad. I hope it's not base from actual experience. The emotions here are raw and strong. Every line echoes a deep feeling of anger and sadness both at the same time. The rhyme also adds flavor to your piece and makes it a lot more interesting.

Keep Writing. ^___^