Selfish

Selfish

A Poem by breezy

Are you happy now?

You tore me to shreds.

Thanks to you I have to put on an act in front of my friends.

When their not around, all you see is pain.

Never ever will I trust you again.

All you think about is your life.

I doubt theres's a second where you think about mine.

Now everything is said and done.

You made your life great,

You had your fun.

But you also made it hard for me to trust anyone.

 

© 2010 breezy


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It's really unfortunate how other people's selfishness can break us into pieces. It's unfair but it's so very true. The emotions here are real: the attempt to keep a facade, the feeling of being deprived and the struggle to trust anyone. Very expressive, indeed.

Keep Writing. ^___^

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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It's really unfortunate how other people's selfishness can break us into pieces. It's unfair but it's so very true. The emotions here are real: the attempt to keep a facade, the feeling of being deprived and the struggle to trust anyone. Very expressive, indeed.

Keep Writing. ^___^

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Funny how liking or loving someone and then they let us go, makes us feel just like you wrote. You've written what I've been going through lately and it fits like a "T". It's succinct! Love it!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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