Move to the moon

Hey I am still alive

Let's just move to the moon,
And never come back,
Just watching the world from above,
How it's destroing itself,
All the hate, all the pain in chains,
So nothing can reach us,
Wondering why people can't love eachother like we do,
Sitting on the moon's ground,
Watching the world disappearing into an ocean of stars...

Author's Note

Hope u like it

Reviews

[John Alexander McFadyen]

I think you have offered up that feeling that many experience of detachment and dissociation, wanting to escape from the terrible things happening around us as the human race scerws up over and over agian.

[Octi]

A very accurate description of Earth. Glad you're back.

[brokenwriter]

It's good to hear that someone likes my poems:)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

you made me think of something when reading this...if we were on the moon looking back at the eart?
would we see a man in the earth? or a woman on the earth?
would we find the earth a romantic light?
I feel like not...because as you say...not enough love to shine the way.
j.

[brokenwriter]

Thanks for your review. I like the way you think about this

[jacob erin-cilberto]

you are welcome and hopefully you will find yourself drawn to my page sometime .....