empty bed

waking up on a tear filled pillow,

hoping that my dreams of you not next to me

was jus a nightmare,

looking at the pillow next to mine,

but my nightmare is true,

so i cry more,

not jus at the fact that you're not here,

but the thought that you won't come back to me.

Reviews

[Castonovia]

Mispelled just twice, but it's simple enough... maybe add some more emotion. Awww, it is very sad though ;}