begging caress

in answer to him tony "she wants it"

stop it... stop it...
just stop it....
you know you had me at
"she wants it"

you read me like a book
spread the pages and read
the words stare back at you
"she wants it"

you know i long to feel your sweat dripping
to feel it roll down across my body
to feel you press your sweat among mine
"she wants it"
 
you know i'm so frozen in time
awaiting your forward movement
not tense but awaiting tightening muscles
"she wants it"

all the world in slow motion
all the world stopped
just you and me in the world
"she wants it"

just stop it....
you feel my response to your touch
muscles tighten you feel the passion heighten
"she wants it"

gentle touch begging caress
no longer willing to wait pulling you in
the spasm you feel with your sudden assault
"she wants it"
 

Reviews

[toni]

i'm in love with this one.

[Orlando Murcia]

I felt a little anger in in here
like a frustrated feeling
and aggression

Great write though Cece

I really loved how you expressed yourself in here


Orlando M

[Wildecat]

Very nice writing, enjoyed reading this fine poem.

[larryb]

Music to my ears :)