BREATHE YOU IN

 

How I want to breathe you in
caress the scent of your silken skin
and let the sun and skies
be ever found within your eyes…

Let my warmth drift over you
melding, melting strokes renew
endless passion in your voice
overshadowing, consuming choice…

Unwrapping treasure’s golden hue
within without surrounding you
until the sunlight greets your face
in endless sighs within this place…

Wrapped warmly in my loving arms
and I so stirred by your endless charm
smiling laughter will be our song
here together where we belong…

Reviews

[TamiViolet]

Sexy photo. Your usual soft, sensuous splendor, Craig, You know how to make a woman feel warm and fulfilled as it is felt in your whispers. I can just see her gazing into eyes filled with kindness and love...

'Let my warmth drift over you
melding, melting strokes renew
endless passion in your voice
overshadowing, consuming choice...'

Love this stanza... The contrast of choice/comsume is amazing...

[Seashell]

This is just so full of warmth and 'true' old fashioned passion...unlike some other writes on here...where there's fantasy/falseness (although indeed clever), but the 'genuine' longing is felt here from the start. As it is not just a one way thing going on i.e. there is giving and taking with love and happiness in abundance, it makes it a pleasure to read and in return, makes it so solid not sordid.
Thanks as usual for a delightful share, dear friend,

Babs xxx

[Poet's World]

LOVE is a beautiful feeling and the intimate moments spent between two lovers is even more beautiful, sensual, romantic, loving...... etc which is something that words cant describe, and you have done a decent job in portraying the loving charms between the two and its lovely.....

[Jillian Alexis]

Wow..this piece is simply amazing!
"and let the sun and skies be ever found within your eyes"
I love that line..so beautiful!

[SoulofManyFaces]

First of all I love the picture:). The words are soft, sensual
like a whisper, and yet I feel love here, a unconditional bond
of two souls.

[We are young.]

awwww so sweet and romatic.

[Astrid Hamilton]

In my opinion, the photograph is very beautiful in its captured essence of sensual nature, but the words of this sonnet are far so very pretty, belonging to not a place of time, whether this red lipstick or fig leaves too, but alone for that breath just of two-
as one, the golden hue the deep love within for always, carried through
in
chained intense longing of eyes locked, words spoken, and the very essence of
Breathing You In-
...
can you imagine someone you love whispering this very song you have written
of love
in your ear?
Like the deepest part of the ocean, kisses upon the neck, chills of the skin, ever so warm, the peace within flows the heartbeats like the same slow, steadiness as the sea.
Breathe inside of me, your words.

[Sorry Infamous]

I'd hate to heap on more praise but how can I not. This poem comes alive with lust. "Unwrapping treasure’s golden hue
within without surrounding you" Amazing line.

[::Yv0nne::]

This is really beautiful. I love the way you write and i think you are a very excellent poet:) I always enjoy reading your work.

[Sandra K]

Wrapped warmly in my loving arms
and I so stirred by your endless charm
smiling laughter will be our song
here together where we belong…

This stanza is is what i love

[Sandra K]

You love poems make me want to cry. I am having relationship trouble, and I realized how much I love someone, and reading this beautiful poem brings me memories, and I wish he was here with me. I loved this poem and really enjoyed it. Very Very Beautiful. Keep writing more