Finale

Finale

A Poem by Marie Harrison
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A story about embracing one's end.

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Finale

Streams of tears falling;

His crepuscular brawn years,

Embracing his end.

 


© 2010 Marie Harrison



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But...But...What about immortality? For surely you have eternal youth hidden in your pocket! :)

Age is the ultimate double edged sword. We need it to get wise. Yet how it effects us, we despise.

Great Ink! Loved the picture you used with it. Nice touch!
Wolfie




Posted 7 Years Ago


A finale that we all face. Good job encapsulating the emotion.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Such a sadness overtook me here in these glimmers.. wondering of his life.. wondering too if a life can ever end in cheers.. Beautiful voiced.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Poignent. And apparently also wotd!

Posted 7 Years Ago


A tragedy in brief .. but beautiful

Posted 7 Years Ago


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the end for some, the beginning for others; it is what it is. Needless to say, this is pretty good stuff. Awesome work.

Posted 7 Years Ago


How very sad!

Posted 7 Years Ago



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Added on October 23, 2010
Last Updated on October 23, 2010
Tags: Senyru, Death, Aging, Golden Years, Crying, Losing Control

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Marie Harrison
Marie Harrison

Atlanta, GA



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Momma told me to get out and enjoy life, so now I'm going to dance. more..

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