a random poem

its a random poem

you are mean 

no your mean

as they say they get in a

fight, it becomes a fight for the

right, some people read some people

write, and some people are a statue in the night

above theres a light that shines in the dark when theres the 

old tree in the park.

 

 

trees swaying in the park on the tree the bark it slowly

sways off the tree some people say it was me

but in the park i saw the bark fall off the tree 

it did it very slow but everyone should know that the misty

things happen in the snow but I thought it was slow

but in the snow it is quite different   

 

 

A Random Poem

By Cody McLaughlin

Reviews

[Wendy Seames Garner]

Congratulations on your contest win!

[Calypso]

Reminds me of the poem I wrote when I was your age.

[Madeline]

:) your very welcome

[cody mclaughlin]

thank you snow bunny

[Madeline]

wow, that was really good! I felt somewhat drawn into the poem :)

[Sugar Plum ♥]

very nice, Cody, you have real imagination of poet, it`s impressive even you made this poem in playful funny way..It could sound more constructive and clear, if you want to, I`m sure :) but you just enjoy this game....and great rhythm!
~nia~

[cody mclaughlin]

ok number 1 that would be useful in a poem number2 it wasnt me it was the old tree fading away in the snow

[Wendy Seames Garner]

Some people read and write, Cody, I think they go hand in hand. I don't know what to think about the bark falling off the trees in the park, did you take off the bark? Or was it all something hidden in the park, in the misty snow after dark?

[SarBear5566]

Improper. "Swear" not swere.

[cody mclaughlin]

my brother said that i swere