they Grey,but she won't

Write what you know about.

He may
Like the other pasture
Better
Good horses
Are ...
a lot of superlatives
They become
The right partner.

Author's Note

a photo captures a Soul and replays its love for all who look.

Reviews

[Tate Morgan]

Time makes a persons personality feel accustomed to another as well. In time the maturity of a relationship shows in the way they are comforting to be around.I liked this I dont say i quite understand the entire thought.However i think I get it

[lee von cleef]

Courtney will never age in my mind, like the high-school girls at the 20 year reunion I did not go to.Courtney will stay the twenty-five year old full life prime beauty or younger in my mind . Then the poem is just the twist of a real reality relationship full of authenticity .

[ChemicalMadness]

I enjoyed this - it didn't feel like a lament....more of a commentary. Love never just is. It is born and it grows. Sometimes we grow with it and sometimes we grow away from it....either way, it's going somewhere ;)

CM.

[lee von cleef]

Most of this Poem was in the Title...

[captain]

short but the thoughts are clear and well portrayed. I found something so beautiful in words and in the photo!

[Tina Kline]

A very interesting poem. Sometimes, what is close to us takes us a time to appreciate, what we think we want isn't always the best.

[emmajoy]

Grief is such a difficult shadow to live in.. finding even a gentle light is so hard. Sending you a distant thank you for sharing such a finely phrased piece of writing. I know about those photos.

[char]

Beautiful words.

[John]

Such generosity in grief, to lose so much and still to be able to give. A comment seems intrusive, and yet I wanted to say this.

[lee von cleef]

thank you , this is one home where I drop all and give ,probably to quick ,not too professional, but a honest assessment of what my head does to these writings that I have just read,The Natzi's watching will have a field day with me what a good scapegoat I will be ,I wonder what I must taste like.

[Horizon K.]

So few words that say so much... growing into love and growing with love...keeps the present pasture the greenest.
Beautiful poem and photo Lee.

[lee von cleef]

Courtney always did look good.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Those who challenge us are the ones we wind being most grateful for.

[lee von cleef]

do you ever sleep? I think of "Bourne" ,and concur,often They are us.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Of coarse I sleep... when do you think I write poetry, LOL

[lee von cleef]

We laugh but,there is truth in writing in your sleep,like the cords on a guitar learned now in one part of our brain ...sleep and they move to another file so your fingers can play them without thought.I imagine poem seeds do the same.

[Tree]

Basking in the introspection your poem has given to me. I keep replaying those last two verses, interlacing into it my own experiences... And that's a beautiful photograph, Illuminating

Diego

[lee von cleef]

writers have identity, I am not sure of mine but, When I read me, after the creation, a lot of my poems "Life" is motion,When I read Diego, yours are "illuminating" "Celestial "with human texture.