My Promise

My Promise

A Poem by theHobbit
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This was an assignment for school when we had to write a mission statement to give us a focus, something to strive for. Just thought I'd share it! :)

"
I don't want my name
Burned into history
Or
Whispered throughout the ages.

 I just want to make
 A difference to those
 Around me now.

No matter how small
The influence,
I just want to make
People smile.

© 2017 theHobbit


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Very nice poem. I absolutely loved it. There is wisdom in your words. Very well done! Keep writing!

Posted 7 Years Ago


Thank you both so much! I really enjoyed hearing your feedback and I'm so happy that you guys liked it!!

Posted 7 Years Ago


You can't ask for more than that. I can see the wisdom in your heart from here.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Simple and sweet, I like it :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on January 13, 2017
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Tags: #inspire, #poem, #smile

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theHobbit
theHobbit

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I'm a starting out writer and I really enjoy to hear any and all feedback so that I can grow and improve. I write poems and realistic fiction and I hope that you like it!!! more..

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