Necessary Evil

Necessary Evil

A Poem by theHobbit

I can't sleep
My eyes
Are weary
They burn with exhaustion
But I can't seem
To close them.

It seems a waste,
Sleeping
So much time
Lost.

So much to do
Music to listen to,
Books to read,
Concepts to understand,
And a life to live.

But I sleep
So I can
function
And live my life to the
Fullest.

© 2017 theHobbit


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I love Sleeping. Its beautiful if you can sleep through the night without any dreams, no tensions and so

Posted 7 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I am no expert but to repeat wasted in one verse seems a little wrong. Maybe it should be 'It seems a waste sleeping, so much time lost.' Just a thought

Posted 7 Years Ago


theHobbit

7 Years Ago

Thank you so much! I'll change it right away! :)
Dr. Wood ?

7 Years Ago

that's better....glad to help

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Added on January 17, 2017
Last Updated on January 23, 2017
Tags: #sleep, #life, #tired, #poem

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