.

would you rather die than suffer?

Sometimes we uphold defunct strings 

attached into misery and broken things,

Even we fell to a strangest feeling

such hopeless, like a bird without wings.

Boundless heart aches and soul devastation

happen every day and night in motion.

However, we still live the storm in the midst of sunrise,

yet nobody surpasses, no one ever tries.

Some are fearless, others already grasp the clouds

cause life's certainly unfair and coarsely loud.

In the latter, we all grab drastic catastrophes

it's depend on us whether we'll be pithy

or pity by chances

it's also up to us whether we'll resume battling

or engrave symbol of period on our journey.

Oblivion. this is the end of our everything.

Our burdens will die as well as our victories

when we choose to be drowned in abyss.

If we are terribly suffering in the hardest pain,

killing ourselves instantly lose the surge of rain.

We can die now if wanted

but close first the eyes and think.

Would you hurt someone if you put period 

in a wrong chapter of your life?

period.

Reviews

[Frank Miles]

Stark and powerful. Suicide is a choice and like all choices it can be right or wrong. The placement of a period changes everything. Forever.

Nice rhythms. Firm images. Good use of metaphor.

Thanks.

[C_theSurrealist]

thank you very much..