Bottled Up

Bottled up feelings

Trying to let go

Like a pool of still water

Wanting to flow

Tears streaming down

Like rain from the sky

'Cause when they ask me what's wrong

I force myself to lie

With a dagger to my heart

I'll end the story here

So that I don't have to live

With any more fear

Fear of my...

Bottled up feelings

Trying to let go

Like a pool of still water

Wanting to flow

Author's Note

It's something I just felt like writing... Ignore the use of no punctuation.
Well... tell me what you think people! :)

Reviews

[TL Boehm]

I think I have often felt like this. Well done.

[Danielle]

Wonderful flow, great expression of emotion!

[Zainab UF]

Raw and powerful. I love how you portrayed your feelings as pool of water wanting to flow - beautiful image!

Great work...

[Laura Maidah]

It's a rough draft. Needs polish. Rough as it stands.

[luna11]

Such a lovely poem...well done! :)

[kingblaq]

Bottled up feelings
Trying to let go
Like a pool of still water
Wanting to flow...

Love this piece!

[deepblue04]

Awh! I like it!!! Good job!!!

[Aehr]

thanks!

[Amila Jay]

Tears streaming down
Like rain from the sky
'Cause when they ask me what's wrong
I force myself to lie

It's incredible. Can relate to this and there is truth in your words. Great poem :))

[Aehr]

thank you!

[LittleLover]

can relate to this and that makes it better! I really liked the flow, and i love the ending, great job, love it!

[Tai Ryens]

Relatable poem, or at least it was to myself. Fine job.