Lies

Lies

A Poem by SingItOut

He lied.
He lied to me.
He lied about us.
Why did he lie to everyone? 
I thought he was the one. 
But I guess not.

© 2013 SingItOut


Author's Note

SingItOut
first poem. I can take criticism.

My Review

Would you like to review this Poem?
Login | Register




Reviews

Edits with capitalizing. And what do you mean by 'he lied to us' because I'm confused. I understand the lying to you, not the 'us' part though.

Posted 11 Years Ago


SingItOut

11 Years Ago

okay I'll fix it. Thank you :)
Wingless Fallen Angel

11 Years Ago

There you go! Perfect!
no criticism good words
thank you for sharing

Posted 11 Years Ago


SingItOut

11 Years Ago

Thank you :)

Share This
Email
Facebook
Twitter
Request Read Request
Add to Library My Library
Subscribe Subscribe


Stats

107 Views
2 Reviews
Added on February 12, 2013
Last Updated on March 11, 2013
Tags: lying. mean

Author

SingItOut
SingItOut

About
Hi. :) more..