Passing Clouds

Passing Clouds

A Poem by chandlerl

A world of passing wonders.

A spectrum of emotions,

that move about as wisps of cloud.

When you're on the magic, high up cloud,

it hurts so much worse

when you fall down.

 

So many little things that shift,

so many things that with time,

are shrouded in shadow. It's said,

that for every bad comment, 10

are needed for it to be forgotten

and society seems to be using souls

as a cutting board.

 

Every teenage star, into drugs or sex

only gives the new generation ignorance,

a green light for entitlement

and a endless thrist for things.

As ignorance breeds only more ignorance,

as image becomes even less attainable

and even more important, it seems to me,

this can only be the calm before the storm.


© 2014 chandlerl



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The fall may be full of pain but, disillusioned on the ground is the only door to true happiness. Illusions, because they are not truth, can bring only more illusions and thus more confusions, or, disillusion.

Posted 2 Years Ago


"only gives the new generation ignorance,
a green light for entitlement
and a endless thrist for things.
As ignorance breeds only more ignorance,
as image becomes even less attainable
and even more important, it seems to me,
this can only be the calm before the storm."

A splendid poem with a great message. I think you have a typo with thirst...:).........

Posted 3 Years Ago


Wow, this is beautiful. I absolutely love the message woven into this poem.
You did a wonderful job!

~Stefanie

Posted 3 Years Ago



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chandlerl
chandlerl

antioch, CA



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