early in the dawn

 

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Early in the dawn A Poem by debileah   how well i remember how well i recall the day we said our wedding vows with a courthouse preacher out on the lawn it was early in the dawn   just a year later our daughter came along now the years have passed by and you have passed on we miss you the most early in the dawn   how well i remember the years we had together throughout good times and bad today i try so hard not to be sad when i visit your grave on that beautiful lawn so early in the dawn

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[IMOGEAN]

A nice little poem.

I don`t think it is quite up to your
usual high standards, but this is entirely
different from any of your writing that I
have seen. My reservation may be due to
unfamiliarity with the style and metre.
---- Eagle Cruagh