Just Breathe...

(Relaxation)

just breathe in breathe out

just close your weary eyes

allow yourself to let go...

of your worries, and your woes

let the softness of music flow

in the far realms of your mind

to a different place and time

let your imagination glow

until you can hold a smile

upon your oh so tired face

just breathe in breathe out

just close your weary eyes

allow yourself to see...

mountains vast and vallies green

oceans rivers and seas

forests filled with the tallest of trees

wildlife running free...

just breathe...

 

 

Reviews

[QuietPoet]

Its like you wrote this for me. Thank you.

[Suelou]

This is something I rarely ever seem to be able to do. Even as hard as I try, I never seem to be able to relax.

[DRIVEN]

Reading this gives me a sense of peace and I found myself reading it over several times.....great way to begin the morning...nicely done

[wizthom]

if only finding peace in a stressfull world could be so easy.
i see a man laying on a lady's lap.just letting go of the days woes ,
as his love says to him the very words you wrote..
damn i want relaxation,, i ahd it there for a moment with ur well writing words..wizthom

[A. A. Zambrana]

I was just about to go to sleep as I read this, and I think I may do the same tomorrow night. This is one of the only poems I've read that actually accomplishes the task of relaxation. I felt very soothed afterwards, which impresses me. Poetry oftentimes stirs deep emotions, and with good poetry you feel the way the poet felt while writing (sadness, longing, guilt, etc.) but I don't believe I have ever come across a poem as genuinely calming as this. I appreciate it very much.

A.
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