Chain Verse Poem

Just screwing around

I chased you with a lawnmower
The mower of my past
My past is full of diesel fuel
You spilled on the grass
The grass turned some weird a*s color
The color of my pain
My pain is in my a*s right now
God you drive me insane
Is sanity something we all lose
when losers come around
She was round like a meaty Zeppelin
that got to close to the ground
The ground that's covered in diesel fuel
you spilled you little fool
The fool is in a deck of cards
What will I do with you

Reviews

[Nia Hope]

Awesome job, as usual

[Baby Ricochet]

thank you Ankara

[Corset]

I chased you with a lawnmower
The mower of my past
My past is full of diesel fuel
You spilled on the grass
The grass turned some weird a*s color
The color of my pain

I can not express the brilliance of this stanza, imho, is incredible, It makes me want to buy gallons of food coloring and turn my lawn sky blue for you, or maybe a soft pink for happiness.

and then you walk up with this line:
She was round like a meaty Zeppelin that got to close to the ground
holy s**t man! that's combustable, that's a whole poem all by it's self...when you stop joking (which I hope you never do) my jaw drops open in wonder of your metaphoric prowess.


ps about the last line: deal

[Baby Ricochet]

thank you corset

[Corset]

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Added on June 2, 2013
Last Updated on June 2, 2013


ha, your welcome friend.

[Rita L. Sev]

Wild and fun - what more can I say? Thanks for the smile!

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you Rita

[Rhea752]

... poor grass. Good poem. Keep writing! :)

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you Rhea

[quinfinn]

do i know this chick? seems i had grass that color in my yard long ago...."a meaty zeppelin" now...that is frickin hilarious! think she went up north somewhere...one of those "new" states...good riddance to bad rubbish, i say! great fun, mark!

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you quinfinn

[quinfinn]

anytime....every time!