Hidden

Hidden

A Poem by Andrew
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Lyrics to a song I wrote

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I'm hidden, trying to find myself. Like a game, and I don't need anybody else. I'm hidden, trying to find my way. I've got no where to go, and I know I cannot stay. I'm hidden. My thoughts, they move too fast to catch. I need them, this is how I find my rest. My thoughts, escape my like my days. I need them, to keep me in this haze. I'm hidden.

© 2010 Andrew



Author's Note

Andrew
I'm relatively new to this. I started writing to pass time and usually don't share. It's easier when I don't know anyone. Any kind of criticism is welcome. I actually prefer more comments on ways I can improve than praise without any suggestions for improvement. But positive comments are also always welcome.
Thanks

Drew

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Added on February 13, 2010
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Andrew
Andrew

Kansas City , MO



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Well, my name is Andrew I'm a freshman in college and if you met me on the street you would not think of me as a writer. Writing is my personal escape, a way to get away from reality by trying to capt.. more..

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