My Last Stand

My Last Stand

A Poem by Andrew
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Very short, but hopefully powerful poem

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I'm not on a beach with a drink in my hand

The mud and the gravel all make up my sand

Don't give a damn about money all I need is my land

Give me my people and I'll make my last stand

© 2010 Andrew



Author's Note

Andrew
Third and final poem from West Virginia

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Those two two lands lack of commas/run-on sentence nature irritates the dickens out of me, lol. But, I like the simplicity of the piece, and the one simple piece of more intense language worked well. Short poems = short reviews. ;)
Well done.
9.6/10

Posted 7 Years Ago


This is truly amazing and powerful! Very inspiring read. I enjoyed this write alot. Very well stated!

Posted 7 Years Ago



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Added on March 20, 2010
Last Updated on March 22, 2010
Tags: last stand, happiness, personal, strength, nature, land


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