Summer Rain

Summer Rain

A Poem by gabrielle
"

To hold and to let go

"


Along the shoreline of this valley

We conceived our dreams

A new journey on summer time-

You and I shall become One

 

But cold was Cymopoleia’s wrath

She sent tides to unbound our bond

And on this shore- dreams crumbled.

To summer and beyond, thus, I mourned

 

Another leap year and a year gone by

I stand yet again upon this coast. Behold!

-the summer sun sparkles once more

Ah, my love, I could feel you smiling back.

 



© 2014 gabrielle



Author's Note

gabrielle
photo from http://abstract.desktopnexus.com/wallpaper/1119397/


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wonderfully written lament.

i felt Poe in this..."to Helen"

damn that Cymopoleia!

this sings with its rhythm, although a very somber tune.

Posted 4 Years Ago


gabrielle

4 Years Ago

Poe's "To Helen" - that's too kind of you dear sir.
Your reviews are very much appreciated.
Sometimes it is possible for two opposites to go together...
Nice imagery!

Posted 4 Years Ago


gabrielle

4 Years Ago

hi ms. multi-talented! nice of you to drop by. Thanks a lot.
Dhaye

4 Years Ago

You're very much welcome.
Beautifully penned gabrielle. Love, loss and rememberance, all in such a short, yet wonderful piece.

Posted 4 Years Ago


gabrielle

4 Years Ago

Hi Lorry! Thank you for reading my piece..
Gorgeous ogre smile by the way.
Distant horizons

4 Years Ago

:-)
A summer love that can only blossom in the warmth of the sun. A lovely poem Gabrielle.

Posted 4 Years Ago


gabrielle

4 Years Ago

Thank you carolann
Carolann Dowsett

4 Years Ago

Welcome

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Tags: summer, love, marriage, death, letting go, happiness, bliss, second chance

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