Waiting

Waiting

A Poem by Carly
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This poem i just wrote. I have no idea why it just came to me. By the way, its not my favorite poem i have written. There is a message in this one, so see if you can find it!

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        Waiting, Waiting

for dawn to turn to day,

        Waiting, Waiting,

for dawn to fade away.

        Waiting, Waiting,

her heart is filled with love,

        Waiting, Waiting,

she soon finds out, he now sits above.

        Waiting, Waiting,

her smile fades to gray,

        Waiting, Waiting,

for dawn to turn to day.


© 2010 Carly



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Carly
ignore any mistakes and please comment!

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yeah thats what i was going for. thanks for leaving a comment!

Posted 7 Years Ago


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As I read this again... I really like it. There's a little bit of mystery to it.

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Added on March 28, 2010
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Carly
Carly

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I love to write. I mostly write poems because they are my favorite to read. They are descriptive and just great influences. Most of my poems are influenced or inspired by other people but some i just .. more..

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