starlight eyes

a song i made up.just have lyrics no beat.

ohh(3X)

those starlight eyes shine so bright

aint no need for a stage lights

she flies so high she soars through the sky

aint no need for night to see the stars

just look straight into your starlight eyes

aint no need for you to leave the ground to fly

just spread your arms and close you eyes

Oh (3x)

let the sun shine on your face

there ain't a cloud who dares to cover your light

your thoughts shrouded in a storm and you willin to put a fight

just relax your mind and close your starlight  eyes  

dont worry bout the wrold going insane and the sun blowing up while your gone

relax and feel no pain ignor the sound of thunder roaring in the back

just think of it as your personal sound track

wipe them tears that are falling with fear

i cant promise you whats next just trust me youll be ok

the crimson red on your t shirt aint blood

its just some dirt that turned to mud

im sorry im talkin to fast but i feel like my ship just lost its mast

all this is happining so fast i think i just came in last

oh whats that i hear how were you so near

engin starts in the rear vission blurrs head hurts

blood squirts from my nose my back takes the blow and then i hear a ramble

in the back of my head askin me why im trembling

mabey its because  im entangling what just happen

open my eyes just to find myself back ripped shirt red and scareped all over aint no need to go thriugh that all over again

guess that wasnt enogh pain so i wnt to my window pain to see a body on the lane

oh3x

those starlight eyes shine so bright

aint no need for a stage lights

she flies so high she soars through the sky

aint no need for night to see the stars

just look straight into your starlight eyes

aint no need for you to leave the ground to fly

just spread your arms and close you eyes

oh 2x

this time u wont be by my bed cuz all i see is red on my hand

wait here while ill get something from what was the van

in my head i know whats gong on not gana tell her the truth

cant hie much longer or i will lose controle of myself.

never bothered seeing what hapeen to who hit me

just found my starlight and tried to go to the right place

guy was drunk got up from what was his trunk

ask were i was going and was showing me his silver revolver

my girl woke up said she was ok bullet fired but i didnt feel a burn

just to see the blood on her chest

oh 3x

those starlight eyes shine so bright

aint no need for a stage lights

she flies so high she soars through the sky

aint no need for night to see the stars

just look straight into your starlight eyes

aint no need for you to leave the ground to fly

just spread your arms and close you eyes

OH3x

Author's Note

tell me whatyou think this is one of my first songs

Reviews

[Bianca]

Beautiful . Simply beautiful aside from the minor typos it's pretty good. YOu had me going there everything was so peaceful and then the opposite. "Almost like a clear puddle of water but you don't realize that there's dirt at the bottom so when you step on it , it rises up muddying the water." That's my take on it.

[soulesswriter]

thank you i woll fix my errors little by little im tring to make a chapter for a book im tring to make.but thanks a lot oh and im looking foward to reading ur book:)thanks for the great review

[soulesswriter]

u think it would be better if i add more?

[Bianca]

Oh no. It's fine the way it is actually - that's to me tho :p if you want to add more

[soulesswriter]

it cool was thinking bout it but really didnt want to add more but i thougt it would be ok if iadd more but ur right its cool like thaat il just fix my errors