The Eyes Tell It All

Can I look at the sun reflecting in your eyes from the water?...

Can we...

Go to the beach?

 

Where I can look at the sun reflecting in your eyes from the water

Whisper sweet nothings in your ear...Shhh, don't bother

To worry about the cause of the stress in your life

Cause tonight is made for us, just you and I

Think of the present and the future that holds the two of us

Young teens when we met but now young adults with love

Trust in me like you've done for two years, I'll trust in you

And I won't hold any fear, and I won't scold you my dear

I'll hold you in my arms and my heart will forever be near

To you, my love, my future, my present and my past

My friend, my teacher, my world, we'll make this last

For no man, no woman, no child nor no pet

Could love me the way you love me...We're set

For life, a life with pure, real and true love

And you have no need to worry about other men for I love you, hun

I'm crazy for you, you can see it in my eyes

And I know you love me the same from the out and inside

So continue to love my soul, I'll continue to love yours

For we're meant for eachother, soulmates who were lured

Together from a higher power that we can't explain

And we have no need to complain since True love we gained

So you won't play any games and I won't tell any lies

We'll only continue to love one another, you and I

For years to come and years to pass in our lives

I love you Korey Clay, and I'll love you for life.

Reviews

[Dragon Witch]

That is really sweet. I remember when hubby and I first started out. That is a world away now. Loving and fighting, two kids and lots of life! We are still together and in love. So good luck to you guys now and forever. Most things I write are unedited and just pour out of me, so I understand that. Beautiful job. Now I am going to bed, it's late and tom is mother's day or is that today? lol

[closed account]

awwe, I love this poem, It makes such a difference when one writes straight from the heart rather than trying to implement too many rules of poetry.. This was great!!!

[DrumMajorPod]

Awwww.. I had a really pretty picture in my mind. A sunset on a beach.. awwwww. You captured many emotions in that poem. It's wonderful. =] It's so sweet the way you reassure him. Best wishes!

[Deborah Leah Krempa]

Beautiful! Thank you for sharing. Debileah