Tangled Heart

Tangled Heart

A Poem by ebonpinion
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This poem was inspired from a drawing I made of a heart tangled in spider webs. The drawing was inspired by Silverchair's "Black Tangled Heart".

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You say I have no heart
You say I cannot love
Any happiness, I can’t be a part of.
 
You say my heart is black
It’s tangled with webs.
If energy surges from it, it must be negative.
 
Spiders are everywhere making the webs tighter
Making it harder for me to love
And harder for me to speak of.
 
But, your love isn’t greater
Your love isn’t purer
You have no love that you can speak of.
 
For to see what I see and to feel how I feel
You have to be as unloving and black-hearted as me. 

© 2010 ebonpinion



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Wonderful read.A very interesting piece of writing. I love the last two line they are a lovely way to finish the poem off.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Spiders are everywhere making the webs tighter
Making it harder for me to love
And harder for me to speak of.

Love this part, this is a wonderful write.

Posted 7 Years Ago


in a way it felt revalating, and inspirational.
a very good read indeed.

Posted 7 Years Ago



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