Not Enough

Not Enough

A Poem by ebonpinion
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Sometimes your all isn't enough.

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I gave you everything there was to give.
I gave you my good
And I gave you my bad.

I gave you all that my heart had to offer.
Even though it wasn't easy for me.

I gave my soul and my life for you.
It still wasn't enough to see you through.

I wasn't enough for you.

© 2010 ebonpinion


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Honestly, the end truly resonates.
It breaks a dam holding back a river of undefineable emotions.
For alot of reasons this touched a bit of sadness in me.
A good read indeed.

Posted 13 Years Ago


You've really done well in this poem. It really to connect with the audience and with what some people may be going through right now. Keep going

Posted 13 Years Ago


I gave my soul and my life for you.
It still wasn't enough to see you through.

I wasn't enough for you.

I so loved this part, this is amazing!


Posted 13 Years Ago



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