What She Really Wants

What She Really Wants

A Story by Monster ^.^
"

Well? I couldn't answer that.

"
Tomorrow is my girlfriend's birthday and I'm frantic about it. I'm actually having trouble deciding what I should get her. I ended up thinking of buying her shoes. Well, she's always complaining about her current ones.

I planned on visiting a boutique shop, just right around the corner. They have good shoes there, I think. But, when I was about to enter the establishment, a pair of women went past behind me, talking loudly,

"...My boyfriend has no style at all! Look at this! (I also look. It looked kinda cool to me actually) I can't bear wearing them if it wasn't for him!..."

I went cold. Damn. Now what should I get her?! I entered the store anyway. I searched with haste. Finally, I found a necklace, but it was too damn expensive!

Perhaps dinner? Should I make her dinner? Well, if she orders burnt pasta, I could very well serve that!

Soon enough, time came: it was the day... and I was sweating... a lot. "Are you alright?" she asked.

"ye-yeah. Happy birthday!" I kissed her.

"Aww," she smiled, "Thank you!"

"I got you a present," I said. "and it's..."

She waited.

"...me." she smiled and hugged me. Well, I guess that's what she really wants.

© 2013 Monster ^.^


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Cool beans, this was great. =)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Monster ^.^

11 Years Ago

Thank you :)
Tavionna

11 Years Ago

your welcome anytime =D
That was fun :) Love your short stories! Very creative!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Monster ^.^

11 Years Ago

I'm glad you like them :)
Hahaha superb! Fun read and how I wish it's more than a written story :D

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Monster ^.^

11 Years Ago

Thank you :)
Aw, that was super cute, I really enjoyed reading that :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Monster ^.^

11 Years Ago

Thanks :)
Toni

11 Years Ago

Anytime :)

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Added on February 4, 2013
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Tags: gift, shoes, burt food, me, birthday, girlfriend

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Monster ^.^
Monster ^.^

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My real name is JS Legara. I'm Male, 18 years of age, taking up Accountancy. I really love writing Short Stories, I like them funny. Since I could make through poetry and stage plays o-kay, I try t.. more..

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