5:30 Pm

5:30 Pm

A Poem by Mirror
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The essence of being a career woman

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Little did I know time had passed
I came in the wee hours 
Check my desk and revised
Decided to rearrange the papers
And set up for today's work
"Good morning" The grudged cleaner said
She drop her broom and mob
Ready to face the scattered brain
movements of the day like rain
To, fro, back, and forth
Swivel and turns, even chairs that run
Both smiling and frowning clients
Ready to get a smack at you
"Yes, Sir" said I to Both boss and none
Daydreaming of home sweet home
Only to see that I have but none
To blame if by 5:30 pm
None of my job is done
Forgive me dear lover
Forgive dear friends
Mostly dearly think I my children
They all foremost do bear

© 2017 Mirror


Author's Note

Mirror
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Remember when you told me you don't want to be involved with drama or deal with me in any way? So what's up with leaving the follow comment on my work about 15 minutes ago? "@Debbie, please read his name. You are talking with a living corpse without home training and respect. Ignore him. he doesn't know anything... leave him to keep blabbing."

If you say you are going to do something, stick to it. You decide the level of interaction we have. Stay away from my poems and comments with your bullshit and you won't have to hear a single word from me.

Posted 6 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The content is indeed worth learning. Well crafted.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mirror

6 Years Ago

Thank you, Onyia. Thanks for stopping by.
Indeed even with a career the children's needs still lurk like an omen above all else. Nicely put. One typo line 7 'broom and mop'

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Mirror

6 Years Ago

okay, John. I appreciate. I will edit the work. Thank you.
An all too familiar story, told in a very powerful and moving way.

This is a brilliant piece.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mirror

6 Years Ago

Thank you larke!!! You are too encouraging... :) Thanks!

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Mirror
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Calabar, South South, Nigeria



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