Forget me not

Forget me not

A Poem by black.butterfly
"

relive in memory

"

Forget me not


As my face is haunting blue

And my hands start to rot

I am long gone from you

So I left you this forget-me-not.

 

I wonder whether you cried

And revived me in memory a lot

Although my heart aches if you tried

But please forget me not.

 

it's Sweet in scent and beautifully sad

Short-lived like a butterfly being caught

Told this is an enough life you had

That is the fate of a forget-me-not.

 

Although as my lips are icy blue

A yellow glow lights my heart

With your love, I’m able to cross through

Take care of my forget-me-not.


© 2010 black.butterfly



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This may not be the best choice of words, but I still want to use it: Very pretty poem! Good work!

Posted 5 Years Ago


I find this to be a very calm piece restful much like a nineteenth century poet woud write very enjoyable thank you for sharing

Posted 6 Years Ago


Life is finite... Sad but true. Nice work!

Posted 7 Years Ago


interestingwe all wonder at our demse yet wont care when the time comes

Posted 7 Years Ago


this one could almost be used in tandem with your 'notebook' piece.....good job.

Posted 7 Years Ago


I loved the first stanza. The flow is amazing in that one stanza and the rhyme and rhythm are great. The wording and the rhythm, however, for the rest of the poem felt really awkward for me to read. The imagery throughout the poem is nice, it's just doesn't feel right in the wording being used.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Wow another amazing piece! I love this piece... (adding as favorite) thank you for sharing :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


you are good.........

You use the English language quite well.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Wonderful juxtaposition between the delicacy of the forget me not and the grim reality of death.

Nice write.

Posted 7 Years Ago


This is a very beautiful poem. Quite passionate and I also love the imagery. The word choice is very good and it seems like it was written quite effortlessly. You did a wonderful job on this. A favorite of mine now that I'm always sure to remember. Splendidly done.

Posted 7 Years Ago



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