PASSION

Its starts with just two,

there love undenied.

it starts with me and you

Our love intensified

Body to body skin on skin,

such passion such heat.

blazing is the fire within,

when our eyes finally meet. 

The look of hunger 

planted upon your face,

My body yearning

for your sweet embrace.

For every touch 

For every kiss,

The blankets i clutch

a moment of bliss.

Fingers intertwined, 

we hold each other near.

Our love combined,

we see our future clear.

It ends with just two

happy and complete,

It ends with me and you

On a never ending street.

Reviews

[LaVonneTheLovely]

Sweet. I like how raw and honest it is. my favorite part:

The look of hunger

planted upon your face,

My body yearning

for your sweet embrace.




For every touch

For every kiss,

The blankets i clutch

a moment of bliss.

such yearning, and then such satisfaction. :) very nice.

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

im so glad u enjoyed it :) thank you so much for reading and reviewing :)

[LaVonneTheLovely]

Absolutely. anytime.

[Sarmelendez]

wow this is so passionate. i really like this one cant wait to read more

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

thanks for your review im so glad you liked it :)

[Cassie]

Wow!! such a romantic poem.

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

thanks :) so much glad you liked it

[CharM105]

WOAH!!!!! Goosebumps the whole time reading this...

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

lol i guess that means you liked it.... i think :P thanks for your review

[mark]

Awww this is very sweet babe i really like this one.
Its one of the best ones you wrote me :)
i especially like this line...

Body to body skin on skin,
such passion such heat.
blazing is the fire within,
when our eyes finally meet.

well written babes. I love every poem you write me you're so sweet and cute don't ever deny that :)
i love you so much my babe.

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

awww thanks babe.
really you think so?
hehehe yer that was a good paragraph :P
Awww now ur being all sweet and cute :)
I love u so much more mwa xcxxxoooo

[mark]

ur welcome :)
yeah i do its really sweet
hehe i like being all cute and sweet to you :)
i love you more ok :P xxxooo