EVERY LITTLE THING!

This poem is about my boyfriend mark just like allot of my others :) i put my heart into it just like i do with the rest. Id love to here your feedback, and i hope you all love it.

Its in the way you worry, 

Its in the way you care.

Its how when i need you,

I know you'll be there.

Its the way you hold me,

Its within your warm embrace.

Its the way you kiss me,

You make my heart race.

Its the way you keep me safe and warm,

Its the shelter you provide me from any storm.

Its in the things

 You do and say.

Its how amazing

You are in every way.

So its for Every little thing, 

I say thank you so much.

For with everything you've done,

Its my heart you touch.

Every little thing you've done

Means more then words can say.

I just hope i'm worth it

at the end of the day.

So baby its with every little thing, 

you do that touch's my heart.

And now with you 

my life can start.

 

                       

               

                                                                                               

Reviews

[mark]

awww i really like this one babe u really put your heart into it :)
you surprised me when you met up with me and said i have a poem for you hehe it was cute thanks so much for doing that for me i appreciate it very much.
i love every piece of writing u send me they are just so cute and sweet.
you're so gorgeous to me im so lucky. i just dont see it much until after we argue :/
sorry but thanks for all the poems and everything else :)
i love you xxxooo

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

im glad u liked it hun, and im glad it put a smile on your face when i shoed up with that poem, i love making you happy and making you smile :)
your very much welcome :)
hehee i try :)
im the lucky one babe :)
again your most welcome you deserve more then i can give you though
you deserve everything in this world.
I cant give you the world but i can give you me i hope thats enough :P

[mark]

it did :)
and i already have everything. your better than the world. i rather have u than have the world.
and you are more than enough sometimes i feel like im not good enough

[NA]

so very beautiful...such cute pics too, delightful read :) x

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

thanks so much :) thank you for taking the time to read it :)

[SquinklaPsyOps]

It sounds like the character in the poem found someone that cares about her every move and is willing to marry him because she has him under control.

Applause

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

lol the girl is me :) don't believe in marridge

[Cassie]

Wow!!! This is so beautiful, I loved it to the very end, such a beautiful poem filled with so much honesty, so much truth and glad to know you appreciate every little thing he does. Good job

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

thank you so much cassie im so glad you enjoyed it.
thanks for reviewing

[sheila.j]

I love this! It feels really thought out and from the heart and the rhyming is great (: I really enjoyed reading this

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

thank chu so much it was straight from my heart. Im so glad u loved it:) thanks so much for the review

[sheila.j]

You're welcome! (:

[annabellee]

You really poured your heart out, it's so honest and sweet. I really enjoyed it.
"For with everything you've done,
Its my heart you touch."
Absolutley loved these lines so powerful like the whole poem.
Well done :)

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

thanks so much anna im glad u liked it :)

[annabellee]

you're most welcome :)