I AM

A poem i made for an I am contest. I don't love it but let me know what you guys think.

I am very honest and unique.

I wonder about the future i seek.

I hear music all around,

I want my happiness to be found.

I am very honest and unique.

I am very loving and kind.

I pretend im fine when sometimes im not.

I feel people should speak there mind.

I worries that everyone iv got

might suddenly fade away.

I cry for sometimes

I hate feeling these ways.

I am loving and kind.

I am scared of growing up and change,

I understand its something i have to do.

I say looking for a job is something ill arrange,

I dream that one day im ready and that's true.

I try to be the best i can be.......

I hope this is enough.

I am scared of growing up and change.

Reviews

[SquinklaPsyOps]

The character in the poem is trying to say that she will not change her positive attitude when she is faced with grown up life responsabilities.

The poem caught my attention right from the very beginning and your writing style brings it all together very nicely.

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Thanks hun the character is me :) thanks for the review :)

[mark]

its pretty good babes. its got allot of emotion in it. things will get better in your life sweety u just gotta believe that. dont be scared of anything :) u will be fine ok :) great write babe.
i love you xxx

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

i hope your write babe. Thanks hun i love you so much

[mark]

u will be fine :)
ur welcome :)
i love you more xxxooo

[NA]

An honest heartfelt read...very good :) x

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

thankiez so much hun :)

[annabellee]

I do like it, especially the repetition in the beginning and the end of each stanza.
But I've read better ones of you,
In the last stanza I find it a bit disturbing that at the end it stopped rhyming.
Nevertheless the poem tells us who you are in quite a nice way.
:)

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

i know it wasn't my best one
i know it would have been better if the end of it rhymed to but i couldn't think near the end.
thanks :)

[annabellee]

you're most welcome :)