THE LIFE IM LIVING!

Everyday I wake up, to a life that's on repeat,

Not motivated for many reasons, I feel beat. 

I do the same thing everyday. My life's a bore,

Things I love, I can't be bothered doing anymore. 

You see I'm getting tired of sitting on my a*s everyday.

Watching my future slowly start to slip away.

There's things I wan't to do. There's places I could start,

I could go on driving lesson's, or join a group of Art.

I don't look into any of it though. I bet you're wondering why.

So Ill tell you some of the reason's, I'm letting life pass me by.

I guess its hard, because where I live there's nothing around,

Every time, I look for something here or near, there's nothing to be found.

Sometimes I feel if I go for something, I'd just be wasting my time.

People then tell me to start from the bottom, and up ill climb.

Although I'm scared because I'm fussy, and I don't wan't a job that I'd hate,

I wouldn't be as committed, I wouldn't be happy and I may show up late.

Id love to think that someday, my dream of becoming a writer could be for filled.

Although I don't see it happening, I'm to unlucky, even though I know I'm skilled.

I'm sick of doing the same thing everyday and every night,

It's time to start making a life for myself, and making it right.

I'm sick of living in the dark I want to see the light,

And when I get to my future I want it to be Bright!

Reviews

[cycy]

I'm sick of living in the dark I want to see the light,
And when I get to my future I want it to be Bright!

im sure a lot of people can relate dear sometimes you sit an dthink of all the things you could or should be doing, then u just dont..lolx well written indeed

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Thank u hun. Yes we do do this lol.

[Jamestown]

Keep writing, your good, if it makes you happy to write , then do it, but only if you want, thanks for sharing.

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

I will. Writing does make me happy, very much so.
Although can't think of much to write about latly

[Robensis]

I like the positive twist at the end. It compliments the writing as a whole.

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Thank you :)

[Michael (Letters and Li..]

I can really relate to this. I've been feeling this exact same way. But just hang on my friend and believe it all gets better. If you want to be a writer then work for it. You've got the talent, just strive for it. Have faith. Thank you for sharing this nice and well written piece!

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Hard to believe it all gets better if so, when? lol.
Thank you for the review and your compliments :)

[SquinklaPsyOps]

Hi Cimmy, it is always a joy to read your work.

I agree with you with the part of committing to a job that you like where you could develop a prosperous future because is your time that you will be investing and I like how you plan to be picky about things from the outside world and that is the way it should be because you are valuable and smart to be safe with your family.

I admire your writings and am sure you are on your way to becoming a successful and known writer.

Here is this song, would like to wish you a great summer. It reminded me of you when I read your poem, hope it describes you and you like it
"Take On The World" (Girl Meets World Theme Song)

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Thank you for you're review hun there always so wonderuful:)

[Penny]

Y so negative hun? I kno u hv been enjoying everything in ur lyf lately but dat is no reason for u to get bored. And i hope u r nt bored of mark:-P The poem is good and I'm totally involved in it. Melbourne isn't dat bad a city too, you should go to tasmania for a holiday. And plz u write awsm and u cn b a fabulous writer, u r. U just need to push urself, keep writing like dis and be cheerful. :-)

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

I have always been negative.
Never could be bored of Mark :P
I wanna go to Queensland for a holiday. :)
Awwww Thanks hun :)
Thanks for you're review and support :)

[Penny]

My pleasure hun. Next tym u get bored just msg me. My crazy life stories are more interesting than soap operas:-P

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

haha ill keep that in mind :P Would like to here and share some stories wid you :)