Sweet Then Sour

Look at me with those eyes..

Smile at me with that smile

Give me those butterflies

I get that warm feeling inside

You make my vision blurry

But when I see you, I never worry

Every time I see your smile, your eyes..

I know that today will be a good day

When I smell your sweet scent as you pass my way

Give me those hugs that make me melt

Give me that loving that I can't forget..

Why'd you give me this pain that I can't deal with

I didn't tell you to give me that

Reviews

[rnuff]

I loved this one, it flows & has a wonderful rhyme scheme.

[Erica Ross]

thank you, that means a lot !!!!

[Peaches]

This poem has good rhythm and a wonderful lightness to it. A little broken at the end though, you switch gears quickly without much transition. Overall a great poem.