The Dead Come Back

Creak, crack
the dead come back
Plead and whine
with shivers up your spine
Scream: no, no!
but the dead will not go
Run and hide
but hope has died
Trip and fall
you can't stand tall
Accept your fates
a coffin awaits.

Reviews

[Dahlia Phoenix]

Fantastico!
I love how you lessen the fact that there's no hope for survival
I see this more in a zombie movie where a small girl is walking down the street and the zombie chasing after her as they peek from a house, people already torn to bits. Loving it!

[Chris Smith Welshpoetcs]

Wicked and chillingly good ; )

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Wickedly funny little rhyme, definitely one that should be sung halloween night! I pictured little girls and boys skipping to this >:]

[Black Cat Fever]

This reads like a very dark nursery rhyme! Scary, chilling with a catch tune!

[Wolf's Dark Song]

This is a catchy little tune and fun in its dark horror! I can just imagine little kids holding hands and dancing in a circle singing this!

[Star Wolf]

Very chilling and the humor in it is perfect! Just adds to the chill factor! Awesome horror write!

[Tina Kline]

This has humor in it but is VERY creepy too! So is that picture you added! Nice horror write here! Very creepy very creepy indeed!