knowing when to walk away

knowing when to walk away

 

 

momentum shifting

hard love recoils slowly

last hand, she's leaving

 

 

 

 

 

erin-cilberto

11/2/15

Reviews

[Alfred Kukitz]

when reality sets in one finds the easy chair of sadness folding you in.

good night Jacob!

regards,
al

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your words, Al.
j.

[rubie]

all the cards must be put on the table at some point....

and if that means walking away, then that's what must be done to preserve the integrity of one's heart.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

such insight....you are amazing...thank you.

j.

[Fabian G. Franklin]

Hard love? I've always preferred the tender sort myself. These days, it's all about comfort.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

yes, comfort and no abuse...

thank you, Fabian.

j.

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Yes, we must know when to stop and let go.
Powerful senryu.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your words, Dhaye.
j.

[andrew mitchell]

lovely Brevity! What came to mind was, no suffering in the hands of abuse no more!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

keen insight, andrew...thank you...

j.

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Oh the brevity... means a lot, saying it like you do :)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kind words, lynn.

j.

[Geralyn Miller]

Compact piece, yet so expressive of that feeling when you know the relationship is over, that let down.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your words, Geralyn.

j.

[Jimmy Yetts]

Devastating!
So much emotion packed into a few lines, it tends to linger.
Cleverly crafted!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your words, Jimmy.

j.

[Lydia Shutter]

You gotta know when to hold em, know when to fold em....and not just with cards. Take your first loss and head for the hills when things have no way of improving. So much said in just three lines. Lydi**

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Lydi...

j.