Changes

Changes

 

 

 

there was a white out

corrected typing mistakes

this edits landscapes

 

 

 

erin-cilberto

1/23/16

Reviews

[Érenn]

This is true on so many levels and I end up in this situation every now and then in recent times. It's true changing a few words and it can completely change the offset of a write. But when reading it a few more times I also interpreted this: Changing our point of view on a given situation can completely change outlook of it. Nicely worded ^^ Thank you for sharing

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your insightful words, Errenn.
j.

[David Scott]

Seems like there is a great deal unwritten here...
Clever Jacob.
The "fog " has set in.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, David.

j.

[Zahra]

editing landscapes, such an interesting thought. very well put

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Zahra...appreciate your visit.

j.

[Sami Khalil]

Might they call you , us the editors of landscapes. An excellent poem, Jacob..................

[jacob erin-cilberto]

they may...thank you, Sami...
j.

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome ....:)))))

[Corset]

funny how a few changed words can change the landscape of a poem.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, my friend.
j.

[Corset]

you are so welcome darlin'

[Kelsey Ann]

I like it! The word document is the landscape upon which a poem is built. But everyone - and everything - must endure change, no matter how significant.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

what you say is absolutely true!
thank you, Kelsey Ann...

j.

[Jimmy Yetts]

An edited landscape!--I like it.
Hushes the environment, as well.
This piece, Jacob, is a minimalist"s dream!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for the kind words, Jimmy.

j.

[Solar]

I like the reflection of the short verses on 'editing' - how it changes the landscape - making it more or less 'rugged' ? and therefore easier to navigate? And what is lost and what is gained? Lots for the reader to ponder!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your insightful review, Solar.

j.

[Solar]

You are welcome always.

[alifeacoustic]

And lives too Jacob. I have often wondered what would become of all those thoughts and ponderings we had but erased behind the white and changed. Maybe we should keep note of them and see what we can make of those words at a later date. Probably be some scary reading, but worth it I think :)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i like your take, yes, we should save them for a later date...i often keep throw-a-ways because i have looked at them later on and thought, "maybe i can do something with this"---

j.

[iand63]

Short but sweet. Sometimes perception is built from observing the negative spaces. This is a succinct and powerful piece J.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your words, ian.

j.