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i'm the hanging indent

on your Work Cited page

waiting for you to italicize my heart

get rid of the quotation marks

which make me only the smaller work

inside the container

since i am filled with you,

why not stronger inclusion?

and why am i always on the second line of your entry?

last on your list, romantically?

three spaces between us rather than two

within the confines of your affections,

you use me more often than others,

the citation referred to the most

and yet?

you nearly plagiarize me

with little or no credit

when it comes to expressing your love.

erin-cilberto

5/19/17

Reviews

[Alfred Kukitz]

I got started on hanging indent, investigated further,
whoa, finding another wondrous script in love's blues.

Regards,
Al

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kind words, Al.
j.

[Jimmy Yetts]

After all, your words are pretty good--exquisite, actually.
Non-pros will always appropriate them.
As for being last on her romance list, at least, you made the list.
Work to be admired, J.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

okay, Jimmy---you got me there...at least i was on the list..:)))

thanks...
j.

[Kelly Scheppers]

You are a painter of words, all in magnificent view!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Kelly...
j.

[Lydia Shutter]

If you are an afterthought to someone who headlines your thoughts, well, it is time to rethink things. Words do not mean a thing if they are not backed up with actions. Lydi**

[jacob erin-cilberto]

so true, Lydi...thank you for your words,
j.

[Cory Barrett]

MLA or APA, i suppose plagiarism is taxing in any form.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

MLA.....:))))
yes, it is.

[Marvin Thomas Cox-Flynn..]

Jacob,

you have penned a most witty piece of poetry here, making the most of your profession as an English teacher ... This poem may have been written merely for fun or sudden inspiration, but if it was penned out of a real life relationship that is lacking in fair treatment for you, then, whomever it is directed towards, I doubt they get the message as your satirical use of words that relate to English and proper typing will likely zoom right over her head with her mouth agape ... Love it! ...

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kind review, Marv.
j.

[Surya]

I loved the metaphors here, still learning a lot from you J....I loved it...:)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kind words, Surya...
j.

[andrew mitchell]

no matter the outcome j you seem to have the last laugh or say in these matters which can only bring closure til next time.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your read and the words, andrew.
j.

[Great Aunt Astri]

Very clever poem. The way you used the metaphor conjured up a vivid picture. Love, 'you nearly plagiarize me, with little or no credit.'

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for the kind words, Aunt Astri.
j.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Not being American I am unsure if a 'hanging indent' is worse that a 'hanging chad' Jacob?
Never-the-less you once more take the metaphor and create a cordon bleu dish of a poem that provokes much thinking. Maybe a love poem or one about daffodils next? Lol

[jacob erin-cilberto]

you are too funny, John...Maybe---thank you for your kind words,
j.