Hostile Takeover

Hostile Takeover

 

 

 

a heart's composure is fragile indifference

bleeding one nightmare into another,

she is a conglomerate of insensitive states of mind

 

i am a small business being 

devoured by the new company she no longer keeps

and subject to downsizing of capacity

to feel.

 

 

 

erin-cilberto

11/2/18

Reviews

[Gypsy Warrior Queen]

I think these are two-fold...disheartening but also awakening...we must pay attention.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your comment, Crippled Queen.
j.

[Mark]

Oh, when the dreadful corporate metaphor becomes reality, sometimes all we can hope for is " You're fired", because that's all that's left.Nicely written, Jacob.

Mark

[john l smith]

We are currently observing a discombobulation and it is not a pleasant situation!
Nicely written
Dave

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you...
j.

[Einstein Noodle]

so full of metaphor and word play .. had to shake me nog awake and pay attention ;) its a risky and heartless business ... this thing called love ;)
E.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, E.
j.