Mesozoic Marvels

Mesozoic Marvels 

 

 

humble rhetoric

is a prehistoric dinosaur

out of place 

in present day

tags of extinct iteration

replaced by exaltation

in heavenly increments

spewed by the gods of political Valhalla's

 

scorned subjects

find their sentences have lost their verbs

semantics screaming from unaffiliated clouds

somewhere in a stratosphere of eloquent elevation

 

as we scatter below

pelted by the reign

of the new age pterodactyls 

who never fly in straight routes of inclusion

but rather route us with strait jacket delusion.

 

 

 

 

erin-cilberto

11/20/18

Reviews

[Gypsy Warrior Queen]

I can't even bring myself to turn on the news anymore...I don't even listen to the weather channel. Religious propaganda makes me cringe... and societal rhetoric has sent me into seclusion. My children are amazed at how well I tune out commercials when they have the television going and how I'm blind to popup ads on computer sidelines.Hmm Maybe CD is right...I have schizophrenically cut the world out! Well, all that one can anyhow...I love your writings J...they always take me to a whole new place!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for sharing your thoughts on this piece...yes, the news is so hard to watch these days.read morethank you for sharing your thoughts on this piece...yes, the news is so hard to watch these days.
all of it.
j.

[Jon Roggie]

This is a different style for you. I like it!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Jon....appreciate that.
j.

[Lorry]

Gods of political valhallas idea of eloquence is to deny it ever existed, and that this is how it has always been. But we have lost something, haven't we.
As an outsider to politics in general, having never trusted anyone enough to vote for them, perhaps someone could nominate your good self to write for them...If you think your mind could hsndle that :)
I really like the style of this Jacob, especially the feeling of calm that tells me not a single word of it was screamed at us.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kind review, Lorry...i appreciate your words, very much.
j.